They returned today
Slinking in their new skins,
Shiny,
Dancing a mating ritual.
Confident, proud
Batting an alluring eye,
Gushing and puffing
Adventures near and far
As if tales and tokens
Could mask their uncertainty,
As if cool could hide hopes
of higher ranking
A pecking order of
Verbal highbrow banter,
Rainbowed lip gloss,
And slouched shoulders
A collection of humanity
Babes to golden agers,
Vying for prominence
Or to remain shadowed
Quick to dismiss deviation
As an unspoken definition of
The collective unique.
“Quick to dismiss deviation
As an unspoken definition of
The collective unique.”
I love the universality couched in poetic language. This poem shimmers!
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Thanks so much, Charley! Trying to spread my wings, so to speak!
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You do it well. With me it’s more like I spread my wings and see how far I can walk.
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Lol! Lol! Lol! Ah, but you do have the punny gene!
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Guilty! …or did you mean puny? 🙂
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Thinking of you and yours. Hope all is well!
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So far! We’ll keep in touch.
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I love how you tied the plumage to the pecking order among humans… a wonderful write and a great metaphor.
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Thank you so much! Human acceptance manifests in funny ways! 🙂
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Beyond the above comments about the metaphor, or rather, conceit, of this poem, there are some really wonderful structural things that catch my attention. The opening and closing lines work like markers that could be a stand-alone couplet. I love that the closer draws me back to the opener! The end words are also well chosen, especially ‘proud / eye / puffing / far. The best part is that carefully selected single-word line of ‘shiny,’ which makes me ponder… Well written and I love that picture!
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your thoughtful comments (especially as you batten down the hatches). I am frequently struck by how people categorize others while at the same time are fearful of rejection.
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We are a duplicitous bunch, aren’t we? (Hatches are battened; this is distraction in the grandest sense!)
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Metaphors abound here- all woven together beautifully.
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Thank you so much for reading and for your comment! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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